Success in the music industry OBVIOUSLY doesn't reflect the amout of talent and musical genius of the artist (the music industry is shit - major labels only produce what will make them more money, simplistic, generic crap, which usually occurs in pop, rap, and generic rock. The music industry sees music as a product, not an art). This and the entire Life Systems album is on par with a lot of the works by progressive metal and symphonic metal groups/artists such as Symphony X and Yngwie Malmsteen. The only thing I think you could have added more vocals like in this one (I don't mind it being instrumental, as there are a good deal of amazing instrumentals in Rock, Hard Rock, and Metal - Joe Satriani's songs for example), and maybe switch back and forth between screamed/growled vocals (like here) and shouted or clean vocals.
Amazing man, rock on \m/
P.S. - Have you ever considered doing some symphonic metal songs like Cradle of Filth or Nightwish songs?